Santa Barbara “Out and Back”

Discussion and Proposal
3/2021 / Updated 12/2021
I’ve done some research on Out and Back records, and experimented with various scoring options over the past couple of years.
This discussion and proposal was initially posted to the SBSA General Discussion Forum in March 2021, but in July we had a spam attack and 10 years of the General Discussion Forum was accidentally deleted in the process of cleaning up the spam so we are re-posting now with a current review an update.
attached for reference and example are:
and possibly our new Santa Barbara Foot Launched Out and Back Distance Record?
if and when Carter post a reasonably descriptive narrative about his Saturday Flight
Carter’s 12/11/2021 KMZ uses the simpler line measurement methodology described below. The scoring is in a KMZ folder that needs to be clicked on to view. Also note that parallax is an issue when measuring in Google Earth. One method of avoiding parallax measurement errors is to flatten the terrain (uncheck the terrain box located at the bottom of the layers tree) and reference placemark altitudes to ground rather than absolute altitude (in various item properties).
I was previously under what I think was an incorrect perception that XContest had a category for Out and Back. XContest does calculate more points in their scoring method for various triangles, but I don’t see a category for Out and Back? The XContest triangle scoring is a bit complicated and appears to offer different bonus multipliers for various degrees of alignment with the FAI triangle requirements.
One of the philosophical concepts of the XContest rules is that you don’t need to declare your intent prior to the flight. You can do the flight and the xcontest algorithm will calculate a score based on your GPS track file. This simplifies the admin overhead and the documentation simplicity increases participation.
The international sanctioning organization for various sport aviation records is the
FAI / Fédération Aéronautique Internationale
https://www.fai.org
Various FAI “Commissions” sanction competitions (HGs and PGs are part of the CIVL Commission) and they also sanction “Records and Badges”. For an “official” record to be accepted by the FAI, you need to complete at least some pre-flight requirements like obtaining a Sporting License.
Hang Gliding and Paragliding Record requirements are specified in the
FAI Sporting Code Section 7D - Class O Records and Badges
2020 Edition Effective 1st May 2020
Note that Paragliders are listed as Class 3 Hang Gliders
Flights can be either “Declared” or “Free”. In the “Declared” category, location points are declared prior to the flight, but in the “Free” category location points may be declared post flight. There is a distinction between “Turnpoints” [section 1.5.8] and “Checkpoints” (1.5.11). where Turnpoints are declared prior to the start and Checkpoints are optional and can be identified post (after) the flight competition. For simplicity, when referring to a Free Checkpoint, I will use the term Turnpoint. Section 1.5.5.8 list the record categories for “Free” flights including “Free Out and Return Distance”.
Section 1.5.5.8 and 3.2.1 also list other “Free” categories like flights around multiple checkpoints (up to 3 turnpoints in addition to the start and end points) and triangles. You can apply for any of the records you choose, but in the discussion below I will focus on the Free Out and Return Distance Record.
Various points (start points, check points etc.) are coordinates surrounded by a cylinder.400 meters in radius, or 800 meters in diameter.
There is discussion and illustration in the documentation about measuring to the edge of the cylinder, not the center (5.2.5)
For “Free” or undeclared Out and Return, we can declare the “points” after the flight, so for the downrange turnpoint we can simply use the actual turn-point coordinates and ignore the cylinder because we could adjust the cylinder after the fact to match the same scoring result as simply use the turnpoint.
For the Start/Finish cylinder, we measure to the edge of the cylinder (not the center) so there may be some geometric penalty that increases as the distance between the actual start and end points increases.
I think we also want to consider the arbitrary FAI cylinder radius of 400 meters and our local objectives. Locally, we are trying to get out and back, so we are striving to define what “back” means. Locally, that often means getting back to Parma or East Beach? We could follow the FAI 400-meter radius requirements, but that complicates the flight. As start/finish cylinder size increase the geometry will also result in an increasing penalty.
I would argue that a 400-meter radius doesn’t reflect what we often do in SB, which often entails getting on course up higher and returning lower? We could permit a cylinder of a larger size (up to 4 KM radius ~ 2.5 miles), but as your cylinder gets bigger you will also have a larger penalty because geometrically, we are measuring from the edge of the cylinder and not the center. I suggest limiting the max cylinder radius to 4000 Meters because that is half the distance from the ridgeline to East Beach. We need to have some limit on the cylinder size, or an open distance flight could be scored as an out and return at half the leg distance x2 legs so the total would equal the straight-line open distance. Out and Return flights can be more difficult than open distance (but not always) because open distance can sometimes have a tailwind advantage, however, if a course is obstacle limited (like east wind in the Santa Clara River?), then an out and return might have a local advantage over open distance and be able to score more miles.
One might argue that if you get back over Casitas Pass and out to Bates then you did an out and return, but the geometric penalty would subtract the diameter of a 10 mile radius circle from the total score so it wouldn’t be competitive anyway. We could use a max cylinder size that connects the Painted Cave Windmill to East Beach, but that would require about an 8 KM cylinder and would only yield a scoring advantage of less than 400 meters compared to using a smaller 4K meter cylinder limit. 4K is also intuitively comparable to 400 so it seems like a natural choice for Santa Barbara’s scenario that will yield a penalty of up to about 2.5 miles (x2) compared to flights that terminate on point.
To permit larger cylinders (larger than 400 meters) up to 4 KM we should add one minor requirement for the cylinders greater than 400 meters. The center of the cylinder must bisect a line (the diameter line of the cylinder) that touches both the outbound and inbound ground tracks, otherwise everyone would use the max cylinder size and place it back to minimize the geometric penalty.
When evaluating the geometry related to cylinder scoring (measuring from the edge of the cylinder), the penalty equates to the radius of the cylinder x2, or the diameter of the cylinder. The measurement procedure is simpler if we simply draw a line from the start point and the end point and measure from the center of that line and subtract the length of the line. This gives the same results as using a cylinder and measuring from the edge of the cylinder.
The Start Point and End Point are not takeoff and landing points, but rather the points that result in the shortest line drawn between a point on the outbound leg and a point on the inbound leg that maximizes the score.
The FAI measures accuracy to 1/100 but I think that degree of accuracy is cumbersome, I recommend we round our measurements to a tenth of a mile. In calculating a score there might be some trial and error in determining the actual cylinder placement to achieve the maximum score.
The FAI documentation also addresses subtraction for Altitude Loss, but the calculations yield results that are not relevant to our local Out and Return scenario as per 3.4.3
The FAI also requires that new records must break the old record by 1 KM (3.2.4.1). Since we locally tend to calculate in miles, I think we should require 1 mile rather than 1 KM? I suggest that a pilot can claim they “tied” the old record, but to claim a new outright record a pilot should exceed the old record by something like 1 mile, or if they exceed the prior distance by less than one mile than perhaps they could claim an outright record if their new flight was faster than the prior record flight by at least 1 mph average speed?
The FAI requires an applicant to submit various documentation items to support their record claim. I propose that a pilot claiming a local out and back record post a reasonably descriptive narrative of their flight. To have a record we need to actually create a record we can reference. We all know that Scotty flew from SB to somewhere in Ojai and back, but we don’t have the details archived for comparison.
Two Turn Points?
Then we have the concept that you can “close a course” somewhere in between the end points? Sort of like a "flat triangle” where all the legs are co-linear. I don’t see an actual FAI record category for this concept? But it appears applicable to our local Santa Barbara Scenario where most long distance out and back flights are somewhat co-linear along our front range? A typical example would be a flight from the Skyport to westbound to Painted Cave then eastbound to a turn point and back to the vicinity of the Skyport.
For scoring we could use a similar concept as using a cylinder to connect the start and end points, then using the long leg distance x2 minus the diameter of the cylinder (the diameter of the cylinder equals the length of a line connecting the start point and end point). This method will yield the same score as measuring all 3 legs if all legs are co-linear but will yield a lower score than he sum of the 3 legs as the legs become progressively less co-linear and more triangle shaped. One of the main advantages of this scoring method is simplicity. The penalty for non-collinearity is a justification for scoring a “triangle” as an “out and back”
Proposal:
I propose that we (the SBSA) adopt the FAI methodology for calculating “Free” Out and Return flight distances without the requirement for a Sporting License and permit a larger size start/finish cylinder up to 4 KM in radius. I also propose that we permit 3 legs, “closing the course” somewhere between the end points.
For clarification, I am proposing that:
Anyone can claim a Santa Barbara Free Out and Return Distance Record without prior declaration or organization membership requirements.
The Start/Finish cylinder must be located somewhere along the front range between Gaviola and White Ledge Peak. (other sites like Ojai, Pine, or Fillmore could have their own local records).
For the downrange turn points, use the actual turnpoint coordinates without regard to a cylinder.
If we want to calculate an “FAI compatible score”, we use the FAI “rules” which only uses 2 legs and permits adjusting a 400-meter Start/Finish cylinder to fit the track and then measuring from the edge of the cylinder to the turnpoint along a line that is colinear with a course line drawn from the turnpoint to the cylinder center.
For the local Santa Barbara “Rules”, we permit 3 legs and closing the course somewhere between the end points. The start and end point must be closed by a Start/Finish cylinder of up to 4 KM in radius where the center of the cylinder must bisect a line (the diameter line of the cylinder) that touches both the outbound and inbound ground tracks. In effect, we simply draw a line between the start point and end point that is no more than 8 Kilometers in length. If we are only using 1 turnpoint (2 legs), then we measure from the center of the line to the turnpoint, multiply that distance x2, and subtract connecting start/end line length for a total distance score. If we are using 2 turnpoints (2 legs) and “closing the course” somewhere between the 2 distant turnpoints, then we multiply the longest leg by 2 and subtract the length of the “closing line” from that value. The actual route of the “middle leg” is not relevant.
Altitude loss allowed is not relevant to our local scenario.
We round the leg distance (up or down) to the nearest 1/10th of a mile and multiply by 2, then subtract the that the length of the “course closing line” from that value to get the final score.
A new record should exceed the prior record by at least 1 mile or exceed the prior record by less than a mile and record an average speed that is at least 1 mph faster than the prior record speed.
The pilot claiming a local record must post a reasonably descriptive narrative of their flight and their IGC file. (records are not automatic) there is no record unless a record is compiled and published).
Additional Discussion
I don’t have any authority to make “rules”. I am not suggesting that we can’t individually make up our own objectives, but the closed course flight scoring is more complicated compared to simpler open course scoring. I think there is merit to “Carter Rules” that indicate you need to land within “x” distance of launch? Also, the FAI has categories for other flights like distance around multiple turnpoints and closed triangles.
Some pilots think we should simplify by some criteria like if you get back to Parma it “counts”, but there are countless variations that might be left out, so some method of assigning a number (mile) score to flights offers more inclusive objectivity? Personally, I rarely land at Parma and prefer to land near the bus stops along the coast.
There is an argument that we could or should have separate “records” for 3 leg closed course flights and 2 leg out and back records, but I would argue that it is simpler and more cost effective from an administrative and archiving perspective to limit the number of categories we track.
Google Earth’s drawing and measurement tools are somewhat limited. There are likely other programs that might yield faster and more accurate results, but the Desktop version of Google Earth is free and utilized my most pilots.
Google Earth Measurement Method
For my own reference the methods I use to create the geometry in Google Earth are:
When creating geometry like circles I untick the “terrain” checkbox in the layer tree to flatten the terrain, otherwise the circles and ground track lines are distorted
For points, I use altitude references to both ground and absolute altitude depending on the use. Sometimes I need both. For differentiation, I use white color for measurement points referenced to absolute altitude, and green color for measurement points referenced to ground. For the Out and Back downrange turnpoint I typically assign the turnpoint placemark an absolute altitude value but draw a “line” in Google Earth to the actual ground location, then I can use the end of the line as a reference if I want to zoom in. Lines in Google earth have their length built in so once a line is drawn you an get the length from the line properties rather than having to manually measure.
For lines, I use the measure tool. You could also use the “path tool” but using the line option in the measure tool also creates a path with the added ability to see the distance as you drag.
As of this posting in December 2021, Carter Crowe’s flight on 12/11/2021 from the Skyport westbound 6.7 miles to just short of the Painted Cave Windmill then eastbound 40.0 miles to the Topa Bluffs then westbound 34.1 miles to the Holly Hills, (closing the course with a closing line of 0.6 miles) then southbound 4.1 miles to East Beach for a total SLOFD (Straight Line Over-Flown Distance) around 3 turnpoints (4 legs) of 84.9 miles, could be our new out and return distance record for Santa Barbara with a total distance score of (40.0 miles x2) – 0.6 = 79.4 miles / if and when Carter post a reasonably descriptive narrative about his flight?
3/2021 / Updated 12/2021
I’ve done some research on Out and Back records, and experimented with various scoring options over the past couple of years.
This discussion and proposal was initially posted to the SBSA General Discussion Forum in March 2021, but in July we had a spam attack and 10 years of the General Discussion Forum was accidentally deleted in the process of cleaning up the spam so we are re-posting now with a current review an update.
attached for reference and example are:
and possibly our new Santa Barbara Foot Launched Out and Back Distance Record?
if and when Carter post a reasonably descriptive narrative about his Saturday Flight
Carter’s 12/11/2021 KMZ uses the simpler line measurement methodology described below. The scoring is in a KMZ folder that needs to be clicked on to view. Also note that parallax is an issue when measuring in Google Earth. One method of avoiding parallax measurement errors is to flatten the terrain (uncheck the terrain box located at the bottom of the layers tree) and reference placemark altitudes to ground rather than absolute altitude (in various item properties).
I was previously under what I think was an incorrect perception that XContest had a category for Out and Back. XContest does calculate more points in their scoring method for various triangles, but I don’t see a category for Out and Back? The XContest triangle scoring is a bit complicated and appears to offer different bonus multipliers for various degrees of alignment with the FAI triangle requirements.
One of the philosophical concepts of the XContest rules is that you don’t need to declare your intent prior to the flight. You can do the flight and the xcontest algorithm will calculate a score based on your GPS track file. This simplifies the admin overhead and the documentation simplicity increases participation.
The international sanctioning organization for various sport aviation records is the
FAI / Fédération Aéronautique Internationale
https://www.fai.org
Various FAI “Commissions” sanction competitions (HGs and PGs are part of the CIVL Commission) and they also sanction “Records and Badges”. For an “official” record to be accepted by the FAI, you need to complete at least some pre-flight requirements like obtaining a Sporting License.
Hang Gliding and Paragliding Record requirements are specified in the
FAI Sporting Code Section 7D - Class O Records and Badges
2020 Edition Effective 1st May 2020
Note that Paragliders are listed as Class 3 Hang Gliders
Flights can be either “Declared” or “Free”. In the “Declared” category, location points are declared prior to the flight, but in the “Free” category location points may be declared post flight. There is a distinction between “Turnpoints” [section 1.5.8] and “Checkpoints” (1.5.11). where Turnpoints are declared prior to the start and Checkpoints are optional and can be identified post (after) the flight competition. For simplicity, when referring to a Free Checkpoint, I will use the term Turnpoint. Section 1.5.5.8 list the record categories for “Free” flights including “Free Out and Return Distance”.
Section 1.5.5.8 and 3.2.1 also list other “Free” categories like flights around multiple checkpoints (up to 3 turnpoints in addition to the start and end points) and triangles. You can apply for any of the records you choose, but in the discussion below I will focus on the Free Out and Return Distance Record.
Various points (start points, check points etc.) are coordinates surrounded by a cylinder.400 meters in radius, or 800 meters in diameter.
There is discussion and illustration in the documentation about measuring to the edge of the cylinder, not the center (5.2.5)
For “Free” or undeclared Out and Return, we can declare the “points” after the flight, so for the downrange turnpoint we can simply use the actual turn-point coordinates and ignore the cylinder because we could adjust the cylinder after the fact to match the same scoring result as simply use the turnpoint.
For the Start/Finish cylinder, we measure to the edge of the cylinder (not the center) so there may be some geometric penalty that increases as the distance between the actual start and end points increases.
I think we also want to consider the arbitrary FAI cylinder radius of 400 meters and our local objectives. Locally, we are trying to get out and back, so we are striving to define what “back” means. Locally, that often means getting back to Parma or East Beach? We could follow the FAI 400-meter radius requirements, but that complicates the flight. As start/finish cylinder size increase the geometry will also result in an increasing penalty.
I would argue that a 400-meter radius doesn’t reflect what we often do in SB, which often entails getting on course up higher and returning lower? We could permit a cylinder of a larger size (up to 4 KM radius ~ 2.5 miles), but as your cylinder gets bigger you will also have a larger penalty because geometrically, we are measuring from the edge of the cylinder and not the center. I suggest limiting the max cylinder radius to 4000 Meters because that is half the distance from the ridgeline to East Beach. We need to have some limit on the cylinder size, or an open distance flight could be scored as an out and return at half the leg distance x2 legs so the total would equal the straight-line open distance. Out and Return flights can be more difficult than open distance (but not always) because open distance can sometimes have a tailwind advantage, however, if a course is obstacle limited (like east wind in the Santa Clara River?), then an out and return might have a local advantage over open distance and be able to score more miles.
One might argue that if you get back over Casitas Pass and out to Bates then you did an out and return, but the geometric penalty would subtract the diameter of a 10 mile radius circle from the total score so it wouldn’t be competitive anyway. We could use a max cylinder size that connects the Painted Cave Windmill to East Beach, but that would require about an 8 KM cylinder and would only yield a scoring advantage of less than 400 meters compared to using a smaller 4K meter cylinder limit. 4K is also intuitively comparable to 400 so it seems like a natural choice for Santa Barbara’s scenario that will yield a penalty of up to about 2.5 miles (x2) compared to flights that terminate on point.
To permit larger cylinders (larger than 400 meters) up to 4 KM we should add one minor requirement for the cylinders greater than 400 meters. The center of the cylinder must bisect a line (the diameter line of the cylinder) that touches both the outbound and inbound ground tracks, otherwise everyone would use the max cylinder size and place it back to minimize the geometric penalty.
When evaluating the geometry related to cylinder scoring (measuring from the edge of the cylinder), the penalty equates to the radius of the cylinder x2, or the diameter of the cylinder. The measurement procedure is simpler if we simply draw a line from the start point and the end point and measure from the center of that line and subtract the length of the line. This gives the same results as using a cylinder and measuring from the edge of the cylinder.
The Start Point and End Point are not takeoff and landing points, but rather the points that result in the shortest line drawn between a point on the outbound leg and a point on the inbound leg that maximizes the score.
The FAI measures accuracy to 1/100 but I think that degree of accuracy is cumbersome, I recommend we round our measurements to a tenth of a mile. In calculating a score there might be some trial and error in determining the actual cylinder placement to achieve the maximum score.
The FAI documentation also addresses subtraction for Altitude Loss, but the calculations yield results that are not relevant to our local Out and Return scenario as per 3.4.3
The FAI also requires that new records must break the old record by 1 KM (3.2.4.1). Since we locally tend to calculate in miles, I think we should require 1 mile rather than 1 KM? I suggest that a pilot can claim they “tied” the old record, but to claim a new outright record a pilot should exceed the old record by something like 1 mile, or if they exceed the prior distance by less than one mile than perhaps they could claim an outright record if their new flight was faster than the prior record flight by at least 1 mph average speed?
The FAI requires an applicant to submit various documentation items to support their record claim. I propose that a pilot claiming a local out and back record post a reasonably descriptive narrative of their flight. To have a record we need to actually create a record we can reference. We all know that Scotty flew from SB to somewhere in Ojai and back, but we don’t have the details archived for comparison.
Two Turn Points?
Then we have the concept that you can “close a course” somewhere in between the end points? Sort of like a "flat triangle” where all the legs are co-linear. I don’t see an actual FAI record category for this concept? But it appears applicable to our local Santa Barbara Scenario where most long distance out and back flights are somewhat co-linear along our front range? A typical example would be a flight from the Skyport to westbound to Painted Cave then eastbound to a turn point and back to the vicinity of the Skyport.
For scoring we could use a similar concept as using a cylinder to connect the start and end points, then using the long leg distance x2 minus the diameter of the cylinder (the diameter of the cylinder equals the length of a line connecting the start point and end point). This method will yield the same score as measuring all 3 legs if all legs are co-linear but will yield a lower score than he sum of the 3 legs as the legs become progressively less co-linear and more triangle shaped. One of the main advantages of this scoring method is simplicity. The penalty for non-collinearity is a justification for scoring a “triangle” as an “out and back”
Proposal:
I propose that we (the SBSA) adopt the FAI methodology for calculating “Free” Out and Return flight distances without the requirement for a Sporting License and permit a larger size start/finish cylinder up to 4 KM in radius. I also propose that we permit 3 legs, “closing the course” somewhere between the end points.
For clarification, I am proposing that:
Anyone can claim a Santa Barbara Free Out and Return Distance Record without prior declaration or organization membership requirements.
The Start/Finish cylinder must be located somewhere along the front range between Gaviola and White Ledge Peak. (other sites like Ojai, Pine, or Fillmore could have their own local records).
For the downrange turn points, use the actual turnpoint coordinates without regard to a cylinder.
If we want to calculate an “FAI compatible score”, we use the FAI “rules” which only uses 2 legs and permits adjusting a 400-meter Start/Finish cylinder to fit the track and then measuring from the edge of the cylinder to the turnpoint along a line that is colinear with a course line drawn from the turnpoint to the cylinder center.
For the local Santa Barbara “Rules”, we permit 3 legs and closing the course somewhere between the end points. The start and end point must be closed by a Start/Finish cylinder of up to 4 KM in radius where the center of the cylinder must bisect a line (the diameter line of the cylinder) that touches both the outbound and inbound ground tracks. In effect, we simply draw a line between the start point and end point that is no more than 8 Kilometers in length. If we are only using 1 turnpoint (2 legs), then we measure from the center of the line to the turnpoint, multiply that distance x2, and subtract connecting start/end line length for a total distance score. If we are using 2 turnpoints (2 legs) and “closing the course” somewhere between the 2 distant turnpoints, then we multiply the longest leg by 2 and subtract the length of the “closing line” from that value. The actual route of the “middle leg” is not relevant.
Altitude loss allowed is not relevant to our local scenario.
We round the leg distance (up or down) to the nearest 1/10th of a mile and multiply by 2, then subtract the that the length of the “course closing line” from that value to get the final score.
A new record should exceed the prior record by at least 1 mile or exceed the prior record by less than a mile and record an average speed that is at least 1 mph faster than the prior record speed.
The pilot claiming a local record must post a reasonably descriptive narrative of their flight and their IGC file. (records are not automatic) there is no record unless a record is compiled and published).
Additional Discussion
I don’t have any authority to make “rules”. I am not suggesting that we can’t individually make up our own objectives, but the closed course flight scoring is more complicated compared to simpler open course scoring. I think there is merit to “Carter Rules” that indicate you need to land within “x” distance of launch? Also, the FAI has categories for other flights like distance around multiple turnpoints and closed triangles.
Some pilots think we should simplify by some criteria like if you get back to Parma it “counts”, but there are countless variations that might be left out, so some method of assigning a number (mile) score to flights offers more inclusive objectivity? Personally, I rarely land at Parma and prefer to land near the bus stops along the coast.
There is an argument that we could or should have separate “records” for 3 leg closed course flights and 2 leg out and back records, but I would argue that it is simpler and more cost effective from an administrative and archiving perspective to limit the number of categories we track.
Google Earth’s drawing and measurement tools are somewhat limited. There are likely other programs that might yield faster and more accurate results, but the Desktop version of Google Earth is free and utilized my most pilots.
Google Earth Measurement Method
For my own reference the methods I use to create the geometry in Google Earth are:
When creating geometry like circles I untick the “terrain” checkbox in the layer tree to flatten the terrain, otherwise the circles and ground track lines are distorted
For points, I use altitude references to both ground and absolute altitude depending on the use. Sometimes I need both. For differentiation, I use white color for measurement points referenced to absolute altitude, and green color for measurement points referenced to ground. For the Out and Back downrange turnpoint I typically assign the turnpoint placemark an absolute altitude value but draw a “line” in Google Earth to the actual ground location, then I can use the end of the line as a reference if I want to zoom in. Lines in Google earth have their length built in so once a line is drawn you an get the length from the line properties rather than having to manually measure.
For lines, I use the measure tool. You could also use the “path tool” but using the line option in the measure tool also creates a path with the added ability to see the distance as you drag.
As of this posting in December 2021, Carter Crowe’s flight on 12/11/2021 from the Skyport westbound 6.7 miles to just short of the Painted Cave Windmill then eastbound 40.0 miles to the Topa Bluffs then westbound 34.1 miles to the Holly Hills, (closing the course with a closing line of 0.6 miles) then southbound 4.1 miles to East Beach for a total SLOFD (Straight Line Over-Flown Distance) around 3 turnpoints (4 legs) of 84.9 miles, could be our new out and return distance record for Santa Barbara with a total distance score of (40.0 miles x2) – 0.6 = 79.4 miles / if and when Carter post a reasonably descriptive narrative about his flight?